Try.
Try and succeed
Not just leave it.
Do what you love and do not recoil,
Or be disheartened if you
Do not complete;
Not to fret, but without
There is no true meaning.
“Is to not try, to fail?”
No, but not to start is not to
Try at all.
The quote “Try not. Do or do not. There is no try.” –Yoda means that one should not approach a task or objective thinking this will only be an attempt. Instead to approach with the mentality that you will either accomplish it, or not. He is saying whether you do something or not, you still try. My poem is talking about pretty much the same thing. That if you don’t try you don’t even have a chance to succeed. I was inspired by this quote which was on ‘Criminal Minds’. And this is just a topic I agree with. You can never say “I cant do it” unless you have tried. I speak of this from experience. I know I have said that, but on the other hand I have been proved wrong by accomplishing a task I did not think I could. This is a quote everyone should live by. They should not let fear of not getting it done keep them from trying for what they want!
Alyssa I really liked how you talked about how we should have a mentality where we don’t get chances to make excuses; it is either do or don’t . I also like the overall message of this post about not letting anything get in our way. Great job!
Alyssa I like how you were able to relate the poem to the quote you were using but next time I would make the poem so you can truly capture your ideas.
Alyssa, i loved your poem! It was really meaningful and sent a strong message!
This is so good Alyssa. I really liked reading what you had to say about the poem. It gave off a strong message and you did an excelent job in you infrence of the poem. I though it was AWESOME!! <3