Success
Often times success is seen as being very wealthy and popular. We usually have the mindset that only the Bill Gates or Michael Jordans of the world have attained success. However being happy in life is the ultimate measure of success.
Success is a measure of happiness and joy and not of money, power, or social status. There is a stereotype that only doctors, lawyers, engineers, and wealthy people are or can be successful. The truth is that if you are happy or are doing something you love, your life is a success. It is always nice to have wealth or be popular but in the end will the people who were your “friends” help you get what you want. Working for joy is the best course of action because that is what will make you a success. Being a failure is not being poor or being that one person nobody knows, it is ultimately being unhappy.
To further prove my point many celebrities are depressed and abuse drugs and alcohol despite having wealth, social status, and in some cases power. Joy is essential and we should worry about it more than our wealth.
Dear Rishi,
Your blog has a very profound meaning. The way you wrote your blog about the importance of achieving success from carrying out joy, truly points at, from the readers perspective, that you wrote this with all your heart and what you faithfully believe. I never even thought of the ideas you spoke in this about how your friend will not help you achieve what you really want.
Your blog has outstanding ideas, but something you could improve to make your writing more strong and more emotive to the reader would be to elaborate on your ideas. Especially the last paragraph, in essence to your topic of celebrity and how they may do the most sinful acts in order to achieve success. You could elaborate on how, they may not receive permanent joy from what they do, and how normal human beings like us receive joy from.. and then you may want to provide examples. Also try to use more strong language, because you are writing in a critical form, rather than a creative.
If you were to write a creative piece on your topic of success and joy, readers would love to read it.
Sincerely,
Mah Noor